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Old 29-10-2002, 09:07 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Lightbulb SurrenderOnline.com.au

Need your Suggestions.. I know some things are not exactly ready and could be still in USD format but please do not hesitate to hurt my feelings.

http://www.surrenderonline.com.au

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Old 29-10-2002, 09:27 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Something I always like to see, the whole thing centered.

Nice looking site however, that shade of green for the background is not a personal favourite.

In your reseller plans, you don't mention WHM.

A couple of 404's found.

Your TOS and AUP both go to the same page.

Nice job.
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Old 29-10-2002, 09:32 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks lats.

Thought the green was something different and the centered sites have been over done. I know i have had around three eheh/

More comments please.
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Old 31-10-2002, 03:15 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I agree. I dislike centering sites.
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Old 31-10-2002, 11:46 AM   #5 (permalink)
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a grammer mistake? "that"?

"Australian Business Hosting

Australian business hosting is a solution we provide to business websites targeting primary local traffic. The site speed is a few Milliseconds faster that our Affordable Hosting due to the fact it is housed in one of the biggest data centres in Sydney, Australia."

I do like the banner, as the first thing you see is a female and then the word surrender
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Old 31-10-2002, 12:10 PM   #6 (permalink)
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on another point i didn't see all the menu options down the bottom at first. I would prefer to see them on the left where they would be easily accessible. and on my screen everything is off center to the left.
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Old 31-10-2002, 02:45 PM   #7 (permalink)
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hello Razgo,

Thanks for the suggestions etc.. could you do me a favour and take a snap shot of what you mean by verything is to the left?

Thanks for the THAT error i see it.

Dont know why we took more care with the US site. eheh

Thanks you can email me the pic of the problem here phillip@surrenderonline.com
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Old 31-10-2002, 03:03 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Hi choppy, email sent. although my desktop is a 15 inch mon set at 800x600. not sure if that should make any difference though?

I also just realised you do have the menu options up top.
I guess for me it must have kind of blended into the banner a bit.
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Old 31-10-2002, 03:03 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Quote:
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...take a snap shot of what you mean by verything is to the left?
Possibly meaning it's not centered
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Old 31-10-2002, 03:11 PM   #10 (permalink)
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oh and about what i said about a menu on the left. i didn't mean it "should" go there but rather the menu you have was not eye catching where you have it.
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Old 31-10-2002, 03:17 PM   #11 (permalink)
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another suggestion would be to have the names of your 4 plans on the front page clickable to take you to your http://www.surrenderonline.com.au/afforhosting.html page?
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Old 04-11-2002, 04:50 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Thanks mate.. see what i can do. ehehe

Got to fix this site soon..
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Old 04-11-2002, 06:16 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Re: SurrenderOnline.com.au

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please do not hesitate to hurt my feelings
You sure Phil? I found a swag of spelling/punctuation/link problems. Do you want them all...?

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Old 05-11-2002, 11:40 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Yes please..

I basicly gave them my ruff and they through it in there prob without checking much.

Give me the borken links also.

They are going through it so it would be excellent to have something to wave over the head and say do this and do that eheheh.

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Old 05-11-2002, 01:07 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Okay...

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Hosting in the main paragraph under the links, doesn't need to be upper case.

Front page mentions 3 years, whereas company page mentions 2.

"Unites States" on company page

"internet" on afforhosting page. You have "Internet" everywhere else that I've seen so far. Uniformity.

"redundand" and "deliverying" on afforhosting page

"Agora Shopping Cart" on afforhosting page is a different font size

audhosting page is not found

reseller page - that opening paragraph needs some punctuation

reseller page - 2nd para - "name server" should be "name servers"?

turn-key and turnkey on front and reseller page. Uniformity.

reseller page - "(and other many more features)" - say that again...?

reseller page - "Its just like" - It's

reseller page - "in this feature rich reseller packages!"

reseller page - "access to its own"

reseller page - "were its owner can add"

reseller page - "there own shopping carts"

The order link from your reseller page is not secure, whereas the one from the afforhosting page is. The one from the afforshosting page then has all broken links if someone wanted to back out from that point. And what is this - "'The support Amazing' By the opinion of our customer!"

server page - "the ability to out source server needs to us"

server page - "state of the art" and "state-of-the-art"

server page - "We offer a a range of"

linuxds page - links to TOS and AUP are broken

managedds page - You have "Server Solutions" in uppercase, but lowercase elsewhere

managedds page - links to TOS and AUP are broken

(at this point I noticed the Order link at the bottom of the page goes to the same insecure order page, not to the one that afforhosting links to)

support page - "methods of support that usual email"

support page - "un available"

"Support/Billing System" page doesn't work

support page - "Please if you do not currently have access email support here." needs at least a comma after Please.
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